Week 12 Story: When the World Changes
Author’s Notes: Read First –
This story is based on the God Narayan. In short, Narayan is
the God Vishnu when he is asleep. The world is nothing when Vishnu closes his
eyes, as then there is no observer of the world. Yet when Narayan awakes from
his slumber, the world comes into existence again. The source video that is
story is sourced from can be found below. I really like the idea of a new world
coming into existence each time Narayan opened his eyes. I wanted to put a
twist on this by making the world change slightly each time as I imagine it is
hard to remember every detail to perfection.
When the World Changes
Day 0:
Do you ever get the feeling that something is off? Or have
the feeling that you are being watched? That tingling sensation on the back of
your neck, but only when you turn around nothing is there. Yeah, well, that has
been happening to me a lot lately. I am scared, and I am ready to put an end to
this.
Day 1:
Yesterday I went to Best Buy and went all out. Security
cameras with night vision lenses, motion sensors, infrared camera, high quality
recorders, and the whole shebang. All and all it set me back a total of $3000,
but I just know it will be worth it. I did not manage to get it all set up
until now, so this is day 1, hour 0. I have a camera in each room, with the
infrared cameras in the living room and bedroom. I am chronicling my experience on
this recorder. My name is Scott Johnson. Let us see how tonight goes.
Here is what I look like in the thermal cameras:
Source |
Day 2: 8:00am
Scotty here again, I just finished reviewing the footage,
and there is definitely something strange going on. At 2am, both infrared cameras
detected freezing temperatures; I am talking -4ºF. Then everything went dark, every camera, every
audio recorder… They all stopped. I am taking them back to Best Buy today to
get replacements. I hope that they hold out through tonight and I can figure out
what is going on.
Day 2: 10:08pm
I have been up all day; I am tired and I have to sleep. I
went and got the replacement cameras after work. The technician at the store
had never seen anything like it and had no idea why they broke. They are
installed and running fine now. I hope I can get some sleep.
Day 3: 3:14am
*whispering* I just heard a noise in the living room. I am
alone in this house, and I am scared to leave my bed.
Day 3: 4:00am
I have not heard another noise since the first one, I think
I am going to try to get some sleep and look at the footage in the morning.
Day 3: 8:25am
So I went into the living room this morning to find what
made the noise last night. This is what I found, and I am completely lost for
words. The box of cameras from Best Buy was in the middle of the floor…unopened.
I know I set them up yesterday, it took me hours…but I cannot find any
recordings from last night. None of the tests I did, nothing. Did I really just
dream about setting them up?
Day 3: 7:00pm
All right, just to prove to you and to myself here are the cameras,
installed and running. The one in the living room here and the one in my room
here. Scott Johnson signing off for the night.
Day 4: 8:07am
Sam Burris here again. Today is November 1st. It
seems the infrared cameras detected the cold temperatures again last night, 2am
exactly. However, they came back online again at 2:02am, but I cannot see any
differences in the house. I am not sure what to think about this. I still feel
like there is someone here but I can never see anything happen.
Day 5: 7:48am
James here again. Today is January 10th. It is
the same story as last night; the cameras were frozen over at 2am, and they came
back at 2:02am. Maybe it is just a bug with the hardware. No noticeable
changes, other than my dog setting off the motion sensors in the middle of the
night.
Day 6: 10:21am
Hey guys, it is Robert here. Something different happened
with the infrared cameras last night. Rather than detecting the cold air, they
showed a reading of 200ºF.
I know it is hot outside because it is July, but I have no idea how why they
are doing this. I should probably replace them again… As a side note my cat,
Jasmine, found the camera in the kitchen and knocked it down. She is such a troublemaker,
but I love her.
… And so on.
Author’s Notes: Read after story:
This story might have been hard to follow. The concept I was
going for was a supernatural horror story. The main source of the super natural
changes were the God Narayan sleeping each night. Him closing and reopening his
eyes started and stopped the world. This Narayana was imperfect and objects in
the world were not preserved. The main character’s name and identity changed
several times. He got a dog that changed into a cat. It went from November to
July in a matter of three days. He was not able to observe these changes though
because they were part of the new world Narayan formed.
This gave me chills! I too watched the same 7 Secrets video, and this is a fantastic and creepy story that I would never have considered. Subtle changes and fear of sleeping brings a great "You're not paranoid if they're really out to get you" vibe. The use of a journal also heightens the suspense, and lets you see the changes that he doesn't even realize are occurring. Spooky and creative!
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ReplyDeleteI just finished up reading your week 12 story "When the World Changes", I must say this was the most fascinating stories I have come across so far in the semester. I love everything supernatural and I especially love thriller supernaturals that keep you on your toes. This reminded me of a reddit post I saw you should check it out https://www.reddit.com/r/creepy/comments/4xznfz/got_a_notification_from_my_smart_home_app_in_the/
Hey there Logan! I really liked this story. You did a great job of getting that suspenseful feeling that a lot the best thillers have. The journal format you used was really interesting, and was the perfect way to set up this story for the feeling you were going for. The image you found was also super creepy and worked perfectly for the story.
ReplyDeleteHey again Logan! I just finished looking over your week 12 story, “When the World Changes” on your website. I can really tell how much time and effort you put into this story. You really took the reader into account when you were writing and especially when you put the author’s note first. I think it is a very important thing to do to take the reader into account.
ReplyDeleteHey, Logan, very well done with this story. Its immersive and really pulls the reader into the story. I also really liked that you structured it in journal entries and put your author's note at the beginning. The structure gives it an eerie suspenseful vibe. It was fun to read and the picture you chose is really creepy and fits the story well.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this take on this deity! I also watched this video and thought of Narayan as an observer in quantum mechanics: When he is not looking the universe doesn't exist and when he is it chooses a state to be in. I think this story flows well with this idea as it is constantly changing. Great job on setting up the tone as well, it was very suspenseful.
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